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 Comments for 'The Darkness Worries - Unwanted Visitors [Part 03]'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Steele  
4:03 pm | June 5, 2003 
			Has anybody ever accidently hit post comment before they wrote anything in the box?  If you haven't you should try it, its kinda comical.
  Do you concur? Concur what? Do you concur? Yes...I guess I concur...
  Yah, this story was pretty good, 8/10!
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			Knightmare(MM  
12:02 pm | June 5, 2003 
			I concur.
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			Shadow  
9:03 pm | June 4, 2003 
			No, I believe underway works perfectly well in that sentence
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			Havok  
7:44 pm | June 4, 2003 
			suspensful ending, but you mixed up a few descriptive words. you said, "the special extermination unit was underway" underway is when ships are moving. that was pretty much my only problem though. good work
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			Argonox  
7:12 pm | June 3, 2003 
			cheers
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			scope  
6:29 pm | June 3, 2003 
			9/10 Lol im the first to post. Any way i like it
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