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			CoLd BlooDed  
9:38 pm | March 21, 2004 
			Sure, you can, once I get a new e-mail address, my other one was hacked.  Fuck man, when people impersonate you and start being assholes to your friends, you can't help but feel helpless.
  P.S: I'll give you the email once I create it.
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			Jon M  
5:48 am | March 10, 2004 
			I heard that. =D  If you guys don't want to hear the voice of experience, that's fine by me.  (j/k)
  But.... As the ranking old man....
  Oh nevermind.  I had a huge tirade all written up and even reworked Cold's poem with notations about rhythm an all the things I typically complain about.  I'm just too tired right now and don't want to piss you all off. 
  If you want Cold, I can email you about this poem.  It's got issues.
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			monitor101  
3:06 am | March 10, 2004 
			Glad to hear it. There may yet be more of the old breed still around. Me and my friends are gonna make a movie and me and apache119 are writing the script so ther just isn't time for me to write fanfiction but i will be back.
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			A.P.N JJiggssaw  
1:12 am | March 10, 2004 
			Pretty good, but I like poems with a little more depth. At least Mr. Rythm & Metre (Jon M) can't complain. Not bad.
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			CoLd BlooDed  
11:35 pm | March 9, 2004 
			I'd be mad if 'Nosolee had left the FF world... I need inspiration, dammit!  :P
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			'Nosolee  
6:20 pm | March 9, 2004 
			No, monitor, no, I'm still lingering around these parts.
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			CoLd BlooDed  
12:29 pm | March 9, 2004 
			This one seems more like a song, sing it and you'll find out.  Or hum it to yourself, whatever. :P
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			teemus  
12:24 pm | March 9, 2004 
			Once again you pull through with another awsome poem.
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			monitor101  
2:26 am | March 9, 2004 
			The only one writer that is still here. 10/10. I liked it!
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			Dark-NiTe  
1:59 am | March 9, 2004 
			I liked that.  It did sound like a song kinda, but thats not bad at all.
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			Thomas Harper  
10:54 pm | March 8, 2004 
			nice approvment =:) much better than mine that i just posted thats out rite now call As Far As I Could See.
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			Lost_Patriot  
9:00 pm | March 8, 2004 
			Wow theres tons of great poems in here, I love this place! Nice poem, but I read better!!
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			ToFu  
7:00 pm | March 8, 2004 
			Gr8 work, I like it alot...ur poems keeep getting better and better.
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			'Nosolee  
4:20 pm | March 8, 2004 
			ooooo, cant give him the extra .1 points, or even the .05 points to round, its like getting a 99.44449 on a test.  Ouch, lol.
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			Awacar  
2:51 pm | March 8, 2004 
			Good, the flow was good, but not the rhyme scheme, or... more correctly, the changing of the same.
  Except the rhyme scheme, this one was flawless. If I have to give a number (I feel i have to, with my comment), and 8.9/10 feels as the right one.
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			'Nosolee  
2:39 pm | March 8, 2004 
			Very good, slightly choppy, but still worthy of a 9.5/10.  ;)
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