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 Comments for 'Life Workin' for HBO, Part Two'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			CoLd BlooDed  
2:03 am | December 21, 2003 
			But for the story it was alrite...careless mistakes like what Jamirus pointed out and some grammar problems.... 7.9/10, also for length
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			CoLd BlooDed  
6:31 am | December 20, 2003 
			I'm gonna send in my ASoWE story, lol finally huh?
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			Thomas Harper  
2:26 pm | December 19, 2003 
			it was kinda boring. i think that there should be some more action and details but other than that it was good.
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			Bean  
1:07 am | December 19, 2003 
			Hmmm it's like a HBO simulation
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			Hawk7886  
2:55 pm | December 18, 2003 
			Oh, so that is what HBO HQ is like ;)
  What do they feed the HSPers? 
  8/10 for length
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			Jamirus99  
8:28 pm | December 17, 2003 
			"I had a burger dinner; he had a chicken dinner.....................................After lunch"
  I rest my case.
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