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 Comments for 'I Fight For You [H&R 9]'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Wado  
12:12 am | September 23, 2003 
			Keep it up Jilly. I had some comments somewhere around here but they disappeared when Louis had to restore from backups the other day.
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			Mainevent  
2:15 am | September 21, 2003 
			I liked it too.
  These people are review slouches, don't worry if they don't reply.
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			hornet34  
12:52 am | September 21, 2003 
			Wow, I just finished reading the whole series, and I'm pretty impressed.  I don't see why other people don't read these stories, they are great.  I can't believe how hard it must be for you to keep writing with no support or comments, so I'll try and help out.
  First, I have to say I love the whole story idea.  No one else seems to use any romance in their stories, and that makes this a pleasant deviation from the norm.
  Second, I loved how skeptical the UNSC was when Ring and the Cheif returned from Halo.  Everyone assumes they'll be heroes, but when you think about it they did destroy the PoA and an unknown structure.  
  The only real criticsm I can give is that each chapter has spelling and grammar mistakes, but thats true in even the best fanfics.  So, hopefully more people come and read this and even if they don't, keep it up because I enjoy them.
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