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			The Author  
4:39 pm | March 27, 2004 
			I think I'm gonna make chapter 2 a bit more Matrix-based, so when it gets to a place where there's a lot of action, imagine matrix music in the background.
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			The Author  
2:44 pm | March 27, 2004 
			Well I've been working on Ch. 2, but it won't turn out the way I want it to, so it may be a while until I complete it.
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			The Author  
12:35 pm | March 27, 2004 
			Yeah, I've been working on my writing skill over the time the Fan-Fiction section was down, thinking it would help my stories.
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			Flu  
5:46 am | March 27, 2004 
			Nice.  Short, but nice.  There was some nice descriptive imagery in there.  Keep working in this same direction.   Add more descriptions about the characters themselves - what makes them tick.
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			ONI_operative_343  
4:38 am | March 27, 2004 
			oh man...
  "It looked almost as if the Earth had opened up and belched Hell into the atmosphere."
  THAT is awesome dude! i really liked this story, next part's gonna be good. i just have one question... is the UNSC ship going to be a big part of the story? cuz if it is, hearing more about that, like weaponry, crew, design, etc. would be neat
  very awesome!
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