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			Elite ZOV  
3:43 am | May 9, 2004 
			Hay, hella nice job! Like the discription. Besides, the guy is really honest with himself. 
  Keep on the good job!
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			spartan117  
6:18 pm | May 8, 2004 
			in the part that says their past lives, the only place where the past lives is in you mom.
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			SeverianofUrth  
11:54 am | May 7, 2004 
			Sorry, no sequel, just a single fic.
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			Nick Kang  
11:18 am | May 7, 2004 
			Mmmmmm...rotting burgers.  *mouth begins to water*
  This story was pretty good.  A bit confusing, yes, but I hope for a sequel soon.  I also like the small hint of comedy mixed into such a serious story.
  NK
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			SeverianofUrth  
8:18 pm | May 6, 2004 
			Thanks, all, and yes it needs some formatting... I LOATHE STAROFFICE 5.2.  It chops up the paragraphs into unholy messes...
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			CoLd BlooDed  
1:48 pm | May 6, 2004 
			Yeah, it could've used some work.  But I really liked it.
  Good job!
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			Snake Solid 117  
4:44 pm | May 5, 2004 
			A little weird.  Kinda cool though.  Althogh it could have used some work it was still a pretty good story.
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