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Comments for 'The Fall of Rye: Chapter 1: The Seige' |
teemus
12:09 pm | March 2, 2004
Thanks Phalanx
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Phalanx3580
8:33 pm | March 1, 2004
Nice, no really good story
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CoLd BlooDed
11:06 pm | February 29, 2004
I edited, hee hee!
*awkward silence*
Well, I did, but I could've done better, I spotted several mistakes I must've overlooked. Oh well, onto the next one.
Oh yeah, good story teemus.
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Setinel
8:06 pm | February 29, 2004
..............
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Jon M
3:49 am | February 29, 2004
Nice. Today was a pretty good day for fiction here at HBO. Too bad there are so many good stories...makes it hard to read them all...lol.
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teemus
2:14 am | February 29, 2004
Thanks Helljumper. I left a post for your story.
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Helljumper
11:39 pm | February 28, 2004
You know by putting in ODST you made me happy. Good story, you move fast, but i guess thats because of the action. More details in respect to the characters so i care about them. Good shit.
ODST
First to rise, last to fall
Helljumpers do it all
Feet first into Hell
PS read ODST lead the way
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teemus
7:09 pm | February 28, 2004
Thanks Awacar. Yea, the last seris wasnt working out, so i decided to drop it. Any more comments?
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Awacar
6:38 pm | February 28, 2004
Now I start to recall your writing. This one let me sink into it as most of your earlier stories. Great to feel that your way of writing is back.
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