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 Comments for 'Shadows of Archon II (part 30) - Payback'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Wado  
7:03 am | December 9, 2002 
			Next ones on the spoke...lol
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			el_halo_diablo  
10:14 pm | December 6, 2002 
			dman I knew i forgot something, or mabye i missed an episode on my downtime...
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			Wado  
6:33 am | December 6, 2002 
			Diablo, there is no MC clone. There is a fake Cortana but this is the REAL MC. The MC died and was brought back to life, however he lost 4 years of his memories. Does that answer your question?
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			el_halo_diablo  
5:28 am | December 6, 2002 
			arrg, how long was MC clone aspleep? 10 years?
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			Knightmare(MM  
11:35 pm | December 4, 2002 
			Actually yes, its something Rhias the Dark would do... Die humans.
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			Wado  
11:15 pm | December 4, 2002 
			Twist at the end? Nah... Everything is just like it has been set up throughout the story.
  Nothing but dust and echoes if you ask me. The UNSC and Covenant allies are running the Forerunner guantlet, for what, so that they can capture the new Alpha Halo and transport to Archons, Nomdians, and Praetor to ask for help. Well in a previous chapter, the Archons, Nomdians, and Praetor have all agreed NOT to help the humans and Covenant. This is a battle they must fight on their own.
  If you ask me, it is the end, the end of all humanity and the Covenant too. Is that the "twist" you are waiting for?
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			master_stu  
9:51 pm | December 4, 2002 
			well i am sure ready for the next chapter. i just want to know what twist will be at the end
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			Knightmare(MM  
4:56 pm | December 4, 2002 
			It'll be out-done alright. It has always been out-done... Always will be out-done...!
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			Wado  
6:04 am | December 4, 2002 
			Vero and Diablo, wait and see.
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			Knightmare(MM  
4:41 am | December 4, 2002 
			Kayhere Shendo, Wado. Maijria Luna!
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			el_halo_diablo  
4:00 am | December 4, 2002 
			yah did i miss a chapter? what happened to Cat and Val and Cortana...and the Real MC?
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			Vero  
2:33 am | December 4, 2002 
			Hey Wado, nice story. About time we get into some real big action. I wonder where the MC and cortana are though? Are they inside the forerunner fleet or what?
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			Wado  
2:05 am | December 4, 2002 
			Man, I'm so way behind on reading other fan fics. :(
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			gruntkiller  
1:38 am | December 4, 2002 
			i just got my computor fixed and it took me a day or too to catch up on things i just read your story and i loved it too bad the series is coming to a close though
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			Wado  
11:59 pm | December 3, 2002 
			Thanks, 3 more chapters to go. 
  I already have an idea for my next series, Knightmare knows what it is, but otherwise it is a secret. I think you will like it more Sarge.
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			Sarge  
10:23 pm | December 3, 2002 
			I liked the previous chapter much better.
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			el_halo_diablo  
10:11 pm | December 3, 2002 
			sorry I've been buys, with computer restrictions and all, but i caught up. Great work! I don't think anyone will out-do your work wado! and just like Arch, I can't wait until next week either. Keep it up man!
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			Arch  
4:54 pm | December 3, 2002 
			Dude, this is one hell of a story, Wado! I can't wait until next week, when the next part arrives!
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