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			Dave Luck  
3:41 pm | July 7, 2004 
			The code.... THE CODE!!!
  How come they never read the guidelines?
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			Jessica  
7:44 am | July 3, 2004 
			Remember how an AI in a Spartan's Helmet is IMPLANTED into his Skull? The last thing he heard was a Drill because the AI was inplanting himself or herself into whoever's brain...Btw, it's kinda odd that a full grown man would fit into a 13 year old's MJOLNIR Mark IV Suit, and i don't think that a 13 year old would be created into a Spartan, as his bones would most likely be crushed, as he isn't fully grown yet...That's just my opinion...
  Jess
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			WingXero  
2:29 pm | July 2, 2004 
			Bah, fine, I've decided to do a backstory, and explanation AND a rehash of the first chapter.
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			Slit Throat  
2:13 am | July 2, 2004 
			"Suddenely, the last thing he heard was a drill."
  ???
  You need to use the code, and, unless you give some backstory on why these Spartans talk to each other like that, I'd reconsider the dialogue.
  Overall, kind of confusing.
  6/10
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			Wingxero  
6:59 pm | July 1, 2004 
			Sorry, I'm still working on my style, I may do a rehash and a full explanation later if there is enough request.
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			Wingxero  
6:59 pm | July 1, 2004 
			Sorry, I'm still working on my style, I may do a rehash and a full explanation later if there is enough request.
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			!@#$  
6:47 pm | July 1, 2004 
			Umm. What was that all about?
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			Void  
6:23 pm | July 1, 2004 
			Interesting. I'm waiting to here more.
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