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 Comments for 'Makin' It Real (Comedy) Part 2 of 2'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Sentinel  
9:00 pm | May 18, 2004 
			Man, too many coincidences in one day. Weird.
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			Nick Kang  
11:29 am | May 7, 2004 
			Yup...12.  Best writer in my classes(except one kid named Dillan but he moved).
  NK
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			MadJackal  
1:50 am | May 1, 2004 
			Pretty good, gave me a few laughs. Did you read my newest story ?(The Deadly Mist)? It's from the Covenant perspective again, but this time it's from a Jackal's point of view instead of from an Elite, like you might be used to. Anyways, could you read it and tell me what you think?
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			CoLd BlooDed  
10:51 pm | April 26, 2004 
			OMG Berconius, how did you know my name?!
  Jokin', I'm fine with that, people only know I live in Canada and my name is Kale...
  Thanks for reading.  And really, Nick, you're only 12?  Nice, that's when I started writing.
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			Nick Kang  
12:05 am | April 24, 2004 
			He made me feel young...I'm only 12.
  NK
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			Berconius  
2:56 am | April 23, 2004 
			Sweet one. Definitely loved that semi-invincible Marines room. I don't have much personal experience with that in fan fiction but I could see it happening.
  On the slightest downside, you may  have exposed a wee bit too much info about yourself in the first part... You make me feel old and I'm only 15...
  Nice one...Kale, O_o 9/10
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			Ross Becalick  
7:30 am | April 22, 2004 
			Screwed to be sure, but entertaining all the same!
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			Void  
2:11 am | April 22, 2004 
			hey, our army(Canada)may suck, but wemake good BEER!! :)
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			CoLd BlooDed  
12:09 am | April 22, 2004 
			Thanks for the reviews guys, and just remember, I'm allowed to pit the ODST's against the Canadian Army and make fun of them, because I'm Canadian. :P
  Anyways, if you didn't know what Bottle Rockets, Roman Candles, and Mighty Mites are... they're all firecrackers, a perfect choice for Canadian arsenal. 
  Now Helljumper, what are your bets on the blind-3-year-old and an ODST (Tyson)?  All my moneys goin' for the toddler.
  *Winces as 3-year-old is thrown across ring*
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			Mr Revenge  
10:44 pm | April 21, 2004 
			Yeah good thing i wasn't in the waitin room.Anyway great story man awsome!
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			teemus  
10:42 pm | April 21, 2004 
			Helljumper, im waiting for you reply before I write another chapter.
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			teemus  
10:30 pm | April 21, 2004 
			Like Cold said me=INVENICBLE. =P Good work man.
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			Nick Kang  
10:28 pm | April 21, 2004 
			w00t!  I was in the story!  I got blown up twice and only had one line but I'm proud to be in a story!
  NK
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			CoLd BlooDed  
10:01 pm | April 21, 2004 
			Thanks guys, and sorry for making such a mess of this comedy, but... what else should I have done? :P
  w00t, FF is back online!
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			Mainevent  
8:04 pm | April 21, 2004 
			I always say "aww hell nah, it's on!".
  Good story.  Poor teemus.
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			Dark-NiTe  
7:17 pm | April 21, 2004 
			Great work man! Very funny.  (And for the record teemus, i think you did have the best part.)
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			Helljumper  
4:55 pm | April 21, 2004 
			I like how u killed teemas that was funny, and having the ODST fight the Canadian army is like putting Tyson against a blind 3 year old kid (with Tyson being the ODST of course, i mean come on did u guys see the render from Halo 2, they are bad ass, i'm so proud)
  ODST
  Feet first into Hell, hope they have airconditioning
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			MC's Cousin  
3:25 pm | April 21, 2004 
			*MCC observes his barely visable, soot stained, clothes, as well as the damp area below his belt, and comments:* "Damn, I've got to watch those explosions!" *waits to respawn*
  See? I told you I was in the story! *MCC says happily, and curses again at MCC's tendency to talk about himself in third person*
  Ha ha (MCC continues for an hour) and ha.  I have to say I really enjoyed that one.  Although it seemed a little jumbled, it was supposed to, from what I conjectured.
  Ah, I was thinking about writing that from my point of view, but...hmmm... *MCC is still thinking*
  Signing Off
 
  MCC
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			Tom  
1:19 pm | April 21, 2004 
			I think this is one of those things where it's only funny if I know about the people the characters are based on. But since I don't it didn't draw me in.
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			teemus  
11:47 am | April 21, 2004 
			Hahaha, great work Cold. If you ask me, I had the best part. =P
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			someone that you dont know  
11:38 am | April 21, 2004 
			Nice. Bizzare but nice and funny. Good thing I wasnt in the Random HBOers vaporiser room w00t!!!!! (suddenly realises what Someone That you Dont Know just said and begins to pray there isnt a "Makin it real part 3")
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			Stuntmutt  
6:30 am | April 21, 2004 
			Curse those deadlines...
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			Sentinel  
12:39 am | April 21, 2004 
			I get blown up in everything. Oh well. Things like this happen. (Great story)
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