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 Comments for 'Hit Hard Ch. 4: --Reclaimer--'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			The Author  
2:14 am | February 25, 2004 
			Perhaps in their tactics, but their shields give out pretty easily.
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			CoLd BlooDed  
11:32 pm | February 23, 2004 
			Covenant in Nylund's books can sometimes seem harder than the Covenant in the game.
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			The Author  
3:58 pm | February 22, 2004 
			I usually base my enemies like in Eric Nylund's books, although Legendary would be pretty cool...
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			CoLd BlooDed  
2:23 am | February 22, 2004 
			Yes, always base your stories on Legendary, ALWAYS, NO EXCEPTIONS!  :P
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			The Silver Spartan  
11:37 pm | February 21, 2004 
			Great story! I have only one tip, I learned this about a month ago and I have found it helped my series (Scope) out a lot: base the Covenant on Legendary, it really makes it more interesting! I also liked the idea of the three point-of-views on the Fafaw part!
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			The Author  
5:37 pm | February 21, 2004 
			Well most of the other parts aren'e as good as this one...
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			The Author  
5:37 pm | February 21, 2004 
			Well pt. 1 isn't as good as this one.
  And for those of you who read it, I will be discontinuing my Halo: Dark Aftermath series until I am done with this one.  This series seems to be getting better remarks and I need time to think up a good plot for HDA.
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			ONI_operative_343  
12:33 pm | February 20, 2004 
			yea, no major issuses, just editing stuff towards the end. 
  i liked it, i gotta go find part one now. makes me look forward to future stuff, too
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			Anonymous  
9:15 pm | February 19, 2004 
			you shouldnt hit people with blunt objects like a roll of paper towels thats just meen
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			The Author  
8:48 pm | February 19, 2004 
			Well for the record this is only pt. 1 of this chapter, so I didn't want to make it too long.
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			MC's Cousin  
2:55 pm | February 19, 2004 
			Pretty good.  It kept me reading and that's always good.  You need to read through it a little better next time ([indent) you know?  Anyway, it was still good, if not a little to short.
  Signing Off
 
  MCC
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