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 Comments for 'The Siege of Zion Base; Part One: Mission - Chapters 1 & 2'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			MasterCD  
6:39 am | March 28, 2004 
			Yes, I know, the stupid computer pasted my comment twice. Sorry!
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			MasterCD  
6:36 am | March 28, 2004 
			Good as the last one. Just one problem - 'his head hurt with pain.' Um, what else is it supposed to hurt with? Peanuts?
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			MasterCD  
6:36 am | March 28, 2004 
			Good as the last one. Just one problem - 'his head hurt with pain.' Um, what else is it supposed to hurt with? Peanuts?
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			Dispraiser  
5:08 am | February 19, 2004 
			How can one update (this one) be two chapters?  You shoudl have madew this one chapter 1, and the next 2 instead of 3...  Sorry, but my crappy logic has made me evil in this way.  This isn't a problem, really, but I'll make it into a huge one in my head...  It's probably some mental defect I have or something.
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			putamee  
6:04 pm | February 15, 2004 
			too much "..."
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			MC's Cousin  
1:27 am | February 15, 2004 
			Good good.  I think it was..well you know.
  Signing Off
 
  MCC
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			FOrunnER  
11:48 pm | February 14, 2004 
			Love it, love it, love it. It was an awsome story. The only complaints I have with this story I posted in the prolouges comments section. Nice work, this deserves and A.
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			CoLd BlooDed  
11:44 pm | February 14, 2004 
			Good idea, its usually better--well, in my opinion--to release one or two chapters at a time.  That way they are not rushed to read them before the next update.
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			Scimitarex to CoLd BlooDed  
7:57 pm | February 14, 2004 
			Thanks alot. 
  The reason I didn't do the whole thing as one is because of size restrictions and I wasn'tsure when I was going to get the chance to post them if HBO went down again.  I'll release probably two chapters in one entry from now on to save space.
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			CoLd BlooDed  
5:14 pm | February 14, 2004 
			At once I thought: "When people post in five chapters at a time they won't be that good."
  You proved me wrong, big time, keep up the good work.
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