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 Comments for 'The Siege of Zion Base; Part Two: Siege - Chapters 6 & 7'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Scim  
2:51 am | February 23, 2004 
			Well, this is the first story I've ever given serious thought too.  I basically read alot, and then decipher (sorta) different styles from different authors.  I'll see how they describe certain things, and situations.  I try make everything as clear as I can, though that can be hard at times when I can visualize it but getting it into words is totally different.  I am no veteran, for sure, but all I can say is to read good authors as much as you can and learn from the way they write.  Don't try to copy them, just integrate parts of style that you feel express your ideas better.  It's great way to learn
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			CoLd BlooDed  
4:54 pm | February 21, 2004 
			I'm no newb, just I like tips from readers on how to make it better and such, I'm also pretty sure I have the basics covered. :P
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			Mind_Affecting_Parasite  
3:00 pm | February 21, 2004 
			I liked it, although since I'm a newb I'll have to go back to find the ones before this one.  And like CoLd BlooDed, I could use some pointers from all you veterans, as well.
  -MAP
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			Scim to CoLd  
8:21 pm | February 20, 2004 
			Sure.  But the writing basics can be aquired anywhere.
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			CoLd BlooDed  
6:47 pm | February 20, 2004 
			Good stuff, and also, can you read some of my stories (once they come out)?  I could use some pointers on how to make it better. :D
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			Scim to CoLd  
5:08 am | February 20, 2004 
			Well, this is how I planned to do it from the beginning, however the FF databases have been screwed up (don't know if you saw the note by Louis) so the previous stories were all clumped together.  I'm going to release them in two entries at a time or less from now on to build suspense. =D
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			CoLd BlooDed  
3:04 am | February 20, 2004 
			Ah, good, you listened to me (I think) and posted only two stories at a time.  Great job, Scim, and keep it up, I like the style of your writing.
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			MC's Cousin  
3:38 pm | February 19, 2004 
			Still goodness.  Still reading.
  Signing Off
 
  MCC
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