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			Traumatised Marine  
8:17 pm | March 18, 2003 
			Hey! Who are you calling a retard!?
  You'll forgive me for using two cliche phrases in the same sentance, but bigger is not always better, it should be quantity over quality (That said, my 'Under the Sergeant's Cap' was fifty pages long, size 10 font.) 
  I know my retinas will prefer to read something that doesn't give my index finger repetitive strain from scrolling down the screen, we can all tell the natural balance of elements that makes a good read.
  I'm sorry Steele, all that text and not a mention of your fic, sorry, I'll go read it!
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			Dispraiser  
1:48 pm | March 18, 2003 
			Ope, that last one was me
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			Anonymous  
1:45 pm | March 18, 2003 
			yeah...  no...  Anything below this length shouldn't be considered a fanfic.  I know you want to appeal to the retards here who don't read anything that doesn't fit on their screen, but you don't need them anyway.  Every one of my fanfics has been over 23 pages in word (at least the bigones...  23 starjacked, 29 taking tritus, 69 The fall of Lunar 4, 49 Legend Hunting...) and have only drawn a few readers but most are the smarter ones...  But in any case ,this is good.  [indent] next time.
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			Steele  
10:48 pm | March 17, 2003 
			Maybe I should have shortened this sucker up.  I mean in MW it was 5&1/2 pages, kinda long to read.
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