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Comments for 'Chapter 1: Reporting to Earth' |
TheGladiator
4:46 pm | May 18, 2003
School is making me busy, so i probably won't start the next chapter until summer starts.
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TheGladiator
10:39 pm | May 11, 2003
Thanks for the advice and criticism. My first story, and I just kinda wanted to get it out there. My next ones will take a bit longer and hopefully will be much better.
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Ishkabibbl
8:24 pm | May 10, 2003
Yeah, I would agree with steele the, "Massing below your position" sorta gives it away.
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Steele
4:46 pm | May 10, 2003
8.5/10. I think the MC's suit saved him from being burnt up, but in the trailer I think he leaps unto a Covenant Cruiser, all evidence points toward this...
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Devil Of Sweden, sorry for possible writing errors
1:44 pm | May 10, 2003
Not bad at all. But the parachute stuff sounds very dumb if you ask me. If MC jumps down to earth using a parachute, he will be fried as soon he enters the atmospher. But the rest of the story was great.
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Ishkabibbl
11:22 am | May 10, 2003
Again with the parachutes...
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LostRock
2:18 am | May 10, 2003
Damn, now everybody's copying my mistake...
(P.S. I am just getting started on my next chapter FYI)
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monitor101
8:40 pm | May 9, 2003
Not bad but the Marines attacking the Chief highly unlikely.
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