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 Comments for 'Brutus, The Spartans, Two AIs and the Pirate Fleet (Part 4)'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			Arthur Wellesly  
10:10 pm | August 19, 2003 
			I'm back as well now!
  I think you sent me that before and I shared my opinion with you then. Well, anyway, I'll say it again for the rest of HBO:
  AWESOME STORY!!!
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			Agent Shade  
4:24 am | August 3, 2003 
			yeah, mjolnir is the name of the hammer used by some nordic god of war (Halo: Fall of Reach), i think any of us can understand why someone would name the armor MJOLNIR hehe
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			Swede  
2:54 pm | July 30, 2003 
			Doesn't 'mjolnir' in most nordic langauges mean 'hammer'? And what does it stand for in HALO? It's somewhere in FOR (It appears the standand spelling for the word is MJOLNIR).
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			Agent Shade  
7:51 pm | July 27, 2003 
			welcome back TM and this was very well done, may this story continue
  however, i just noticed one problem, but i do not know if it is a problem. although the URA-MJOLINER sounds kool, isn't it MJOLNIR, not MJOLINER? just thought i'd point that out
  keep it up 9/10
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			Steele  
12:21 pm | July 25, 2003 
			Yes, the part about the poor Grunt brought a tear to my eye...
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			Da Mann  
1:48 am | July 25, 2003 
			Sweet! You write well TR.
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			Traumatised Marine  
9:18 am | July 24, 2003 
			Yeah, good to be back.
  Uh, 'Nosolee it's not a Brute Force/Halo crossover, I started writing this before I'd heard of the Brute Force characters. Brutus in this fiction is in fact the master- project of one Professor Zolkievich, an Elite-clone, an alien supersoldier serving the humans with intent to gain information and sabotage from within the Covenant military.
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			Jamirus99  
8:51 pm | July 23, 2003 
			Hey hey hey! Back in busines (!) with only a little prod from me. ;)
  Poor little Grunt...anyway, great, excellent, exceeding expectations. I can't beleive how swiftly you wrote that, and yet it is remarkably free from error. Your usual few grammar problems, but nothing that prevented a long waiting, eager reader.
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			Steele  
6:20 pm | July 23, 2003 
			Nice to see you're back, TM.  Where have you been these last couple of months?  Excellent story, 9.5/10.
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			'Nosolee  
5:44 pm | July 23, 2003 
			Awesome story, 9.5/10.  I was thinking about doing a Brute Force/Halo crossover, but you beat me too it.  ;-)
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