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Comments for 'Brutus, The Spartans, Two AIs and the Pirate Fleet (Part 5)' |
monitor101
12:02 pm | November 26, 2003
Dammit TM where you been? Glad to see your back and bloodly brilliant work as always! Keep it up man 10/10 and do't go away for like a year and then come back.
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Jamirus99
8:12 pm | November 25, 2003
Gah! I want to read more!
Choppy as in punctuation nonexistent or used improperly....the comma and semi-colon are your friend!
Other than that, wonderful, and I hope you get on the next installment!
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Traumatised Marine
7:14 pm | November 25, 2003
Help me out here, 'Choppy' where I live we use that word to describe what the surf is like, what context are you using it in???
I'm afraid I only posted this chapter because I found it a few days ago and decided I might as well post it, I don't have the time to write fics for the moment. That's also the reason why it wasn't up to standard- didn't check it.
Cheers.
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hornet34
12:44 pm | November 25, 2003
Nice to have you back. Sorry, I haven't read the story yet, but only because I've got to go back and read the whole series first. Still, anything from you is definitely promising.
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Steele
11:55 pm | November 24, 2003
Yeah, it has been awhile since I last saw you up here, TM. Where ya' been, ol' bean?
Nice story, though there are some grammar problems and it was a bit choppy. Gettin' rusty? =)
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Jamirus99
9:08 pm | November 24, 2003
Whooowee! Back after a long hiatus, I see. The story is shaping us nicely, TM, but a bit choppy. Overall though, since I'm the only one here who knows what's gonna happen.....I'd have to say it's gonna be great. ;-)
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Taze
6:36 pm | November 24, 2003
Good story. 9/10
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