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Comments for 'Used, Abused, and Blown to Smithereens: The tale of a Covenant Grunt - Chapter One' |
Alpha Lance
11:45 am | September 2, 2003
Yeah! Were Chapter two? And how old are you. And read my story 'Halo Trilogy' Stacey. And also read my peoms. But you probaly won't see this comment, though.
Alpha Lance
Creator of Halo Trilogy
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Stacey
9:52 pm | August 12, 2003
when When WHEN are you going to post chapter two?!!!?! Always finish the things you start!!! I thought I taught you better than that, little brother.
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Alpha Lance
5:18 am | July 27, 2003
Nice going little man.
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Stacey
3:00 pm | July 22, 2003
and you're taking way too long to write chapter two. i watch you every day and it's not like you don't have the free time to write it.
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Stacey
2:58 pm | July 22, 2003
See that, Brandon? You'll be UTTERLY CRUSHED!!!!
Mwahahahaha!!! And it's not like you don't have it coming, either.
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MadJackal
9:16 pm | July 21, 2003
Yeah, Stacey's right! I'm the friend she was talking about! You know, the one who beat the game on legendary? I'm looking forward to crushing you utterly in a Slayer match or two!;)
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Stacey
5:42 pm | July 20, 2003
Come on. Hurry up with chapter 2, little brother.
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MadJackal
9:14 pm | July 18, 2003
Other then the format, I thought this was good story. Very creative. Keep it up.
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Ultimate Grunt
8:45 pm | July 18, 2003
I just wanted to apoligize for the way the format worked out. I wrote it in notepad and then pasted it on here, and it was around 1:30 in the morning and I didn't have a lot of time to check the preview. Anyway thanks for reading it.
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Stacey
2:45 pm | July 18, 2003
Well I can't believe they posted it, but they did. I can't believe people actually liked it, but they did. I admire you posting it even after you picked up on my sarcasm when I told you it stood a chance. Apparently, I was wrong. I don't get it, but whatever. Maybe it's because i'm not a big Grunt fan. Anyway, you should definately fix the format for your future fics. Sincerely, Stacey
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Neco Divad
2:22 am | July 18, 2003
It was good, exept it looked like you wrote in notepad. That's the way I wrote my first though. Got screwed up as well. Nice work though.
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Hawk7886
10:03 pm | July 17, 2003
Nice story. What was up with the format? It was kinda hard to read when the words were arranged like that. Some confusing wording, too. 8.5/10
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pj-NYkr90
9:12 pm | July 17, 2003
kewl. But choppy form ruined a flawless story. I liked how the grunt tells the story. Finally, a Grunt stands up for himself. POWER TO THE GRUNTS!!!!!!!
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Simon
3:34 pm | July 17, 2003
Good story. Very interesting. Try to fix the annoying way in turned out though.
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Havok
2:47 pm | July 17, 2003
i liked it, but i wanna know how the grunts know several languages when they are conscripted into the army five months after birth, and mostly get killed after a year. i like this one a lot though. just constructive criticism.
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Hikaru-119
2:24 pm | July 17, 2003
I like the thought of a Grunt telling a tale. Similar to my failed Jackal one that I never posted. One other correction though. Grunts don't speak English themselves. The Chief and just about every other human soldier has a translator device stuck into their helmets or implants. That is because we've fought them even more so than any other unit. Still great idea, keep writing.
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Gasmask
1:57 pm | July 17, 2003
The story was very good, but please, please, please correct the absolute choppiness of the form. It detracts from an otherwise nearly flawless tale.
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