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Comments for 'John 117: The Second Coming Part One: Taking Control' |
Matt
6:00 pm | February 28, 2003
Great story! It might even be a possible start for halo 2. Keep writing.
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Sarge
11:58 am | October 15, 2002
Merry Marines isn't that big of a deal. It's not a medal (and don't say I'm jealous cause I used to be one.)
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Spartan673
10:57 pm | October 12, 2002
OOOHHH! Look! I'm using 415's name!
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Spartan415 (MM
8:54 pm | October 12, 2002
never! BITER!
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Spartan8934
2:26 pm | October 12, 2002
Hey, I'm only using the "Spartan" part of your name. Give us some freedom!
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el_halo_diablo
11:24 am | October 12, 2002
Spartan8943...just SHUT THE FUCK UP WITH THE GRAMMAR FOR GODS SAKE!!!(sorry for the expletives)
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Spartan415 (MM
3:27 am | October 12, 2002
why did u take my namethis was hard to think of okplus im a member of the merry marines and not uHAHAnewbie comment poster!
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Spartan8934
1:44 am | October 12, 2002
It's 8934, not 8943.
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Spartan8934
9:07 pm | October 11, 2002
"THEY'LL RUN ME OUTTA BUISINESS!!"Kyle, I have to correct you on the "outta" part of your sentence. "outta" Is not a real word, the real word to put in would be "Out of", not "outta". Also, I beleive that it's spelled "BUSINESS", not "BUISINESS".
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Commander elite 8721
9:05 pm | October 11, 2002
Hmmm... I never thought of that.
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Kyle
9:03 pm | October 11, 2002
Great.. TOO MANY NEWBIES!!! THEY'LL RUN ME OUTTA BUISINESS!!
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WildebeestNZ
4:35 am | October 11, 2002
Correction id like to make myself there:what i meant to say was, I just thought I'd add a little more emotion and variety to the combat/violence.
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WildebeestNZ
3:27 am | October 11, 2002
Thanks, its my first one. Yeah I know what you mean by John not being badass, my story starts off, obviously, at the beginning of the movie trailer for Halo 2.The reason I decided John was a badass in this one was that he had a reason to- the Covenant attacking Earth. I just thought I'd add a little more realism and combat to the violence, u know?I'm posting part 2 today. Not sure when it will popup though.Apart from John showing so much anger, I tried really hard to make the characters as much like they were in the game (esp. Cortana.)Cheers for the feedback thoughBeest
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Knightmare(MM
2:20 am | October 11, 2002
Nicely done with Cortana here... However John is just not the type to not be badass. In short, he was badass. So... Great story!
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